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mothers love


love,










pure as honey
oozing from tender flower
humus of a soil
helps to grow the plant

mother is earth,gives last drop,
till sibling survives,
a tall tree has its roots
planted in her bosom

her patience eternal
perennial flow of river
quenches child's thirst,
she sense hurts
before child is aware

she is shadow in success and failure
companion in set backs,
one misses her
when others desert
on trivial pretext










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  • to grow we simply need to observe nature in all of it's beauty.
    when we are able to match its beauty and simplicity, we become masters of ourselves
    lovely and deep
    your poem reminds me of this truth
    God bless you my friend...


  • maralisa silver member
    May 9

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    aw a beautiful write for mothers day dad I love your imagery and depth of feeling throughout good luck in the contestmaralisa