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Cemetary Rose

Missing image
Creative beyond compare
Elegant with her words
My saving grace on this site
Each comment an ego feed  
Too sweet for words
And too cute, too
Ready to lend a helping hand
You couldn't ask for a better friend

Realizing my fortune to find her
Overcome with glee  
She is a sister in
Every sense of the word

Author notes

I love my lil cemetary rose, she is the coolest

an acrostic....


Written March 10th, 2004

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  • individuality gold member
    March 28, 2008

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    a good smiling piece of poetry that showers love and admiration and friendship to another, let the smiles dance


  • candy177
    March 20, 2004
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    Ohhhh so that's what an acrostic is! I've never written one myself wow....this is so great! It truly is wonderful when someone writes a poem for/about you. What a stunning tribute to your friend So sweet....

  • shadowed ghost
    March 17, 2004
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    Hey I know this girl! (I really do!) You did an awesome job of describing her. And I can see that she liked it too...well no wonder! Great Acrostic (is that how you spell it? I dunno)
    Good job
    ~isa~


  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    March 15, 2004
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    I had instant messaged him that was a pic you did of yourself and that it was perfect I looked at his author page, and he is one that makes at least one negative comment on almost every poem he reads. Although he did like my acrostic... wooohooo .... lol


  • Cemetery Rose
    March 15, 2004
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    I'm sorry that you feel that way...the pic is actually a drawing that I did a little while ago..it is supposed to be me as a fairy so that is why she put it up with this poem. It was done on the general paint program on my new mac (which did not have photoshop at the time). So I know its not the best quality. So please don't take away any bad thoughts from her poem she was just being nice to me.
    Susan


  • freakonaleash
    March 14, 2004
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    ~GR8!!!~

    That was a nice poem, im sure cemetary rose liked it, lol, wait, she did, she commented on it and she did, lol, well, that just proves my point! lol, GR8 POEM! KEEP UP THE KICK AZZ WORKZ! hehe

  • christabella
    March 12, 2004
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    cool

    This is so cool! I love the set up of it...I forget what you call it when you spell something out with the first letter of each line, but you did that exceptionally well...What I mean is that it's not random things, it flows so well, and it's so sweet of you to write something so beautiful for your friend. Thanks for sharing
    ~christabella~


  • Cemetery Rose
    March 11, 2004
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    So sweet my teeth hurt

    Awwwwwwwwwe sweetie that was awesome, I love it!!! I'm trying to not cry cause I'm in the computer lab surrounded by people who would ask me too questions That is just soooooo incredibly sweet! Thanks for the smile, You are my saving grace tooo!

    Thanks for the awesome poem.
    Peace and love and s
    Susan


  • My Darkness
    March 11, 2004
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    She is definetely someone special to you, this was really nice and beautiful...great job girl...keep up the awesome work, you know you are brilliant..

    See ya

    -Stac-


  • moonlitmirror
    March 10, 2004
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    This is really sweet, a very very nice dedication to your friend. I'm sure that she'll really really like it. Having a poem written for you or about you really is a special thing..that gives you a great feeling. Thanks for sharing, very very nicely done!! Great work!

    ~blessings~

    ~rora


  • March 10, 2004
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    That is a very nice ode to Cemetary Rose, and ah! I see it is an acrostic. I'm glad you mentioned that...Anyway, you wrote with beautiful sentiment, and that is great. I'm just afraid the poor quality of the picture takes away from the superiority of the acrostic. Well, have a good day!
    Edited on Mar 11 because ''.

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