Sweat spits evident radiation,
Chemical contractions expressed through
Chewed fingernails & chapped lips.
A sweetness so glorious to devour wholly.
Fragrance, aromatically enchanting,
Lips inviting souls towards saccharine skies.
Poisonous ivies surrounded your perfect halo;
Let me reach your tree to grant you the apple.
Hands had spoken, voices corrupted. Love in the air.
I catch you throw, savoring cold embraces,
misguided, misplacing evident conclusions.
Touch; never leading towards something.
Marvelous, lonely nights & cellophane kisses,
you suffocate me everyday in what today I named after you.
Fingertips stretched, reaching melodious disdain,
spoke through minors & highs, flats & notes;
Silence.
Silent.
Dead.
Awake.
Brightly, early morning;
darkened by the sudden exhortation;
mind's gone, exploration. You're not here.
You're not real.
This is just another Sunday morning dream.
Where blue prairie skies turn into cerulean oceans, drowning daylight by it's throat.
Author notes
idk! ugh! weird!
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Dreamy loves desire
Such words inspire
Calm reflection stills you
Can love save and kill too
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Rich with possible interpretation! This has a lofty, calm way that it reads and punctuates well at the end. Nicely done.
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so much imagery!! u have such an amazing gift! dont ever stop writing!
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illusions of love, painted in such imagery....You take us on the fantasy visions of love, and then we are confronted with this illusion...It is not existent.."melodious disdain spoken through minors and highs, flats and notes...silence" Keep penning ...you are talented!
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thank you very much... I am glad you enjoyed it.. thanks for reading and commenting!
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umm i didn't really understand it but its good i guess i liked the part " You're not real.
This is just another Sunday morning dream.
Where blue prairie skies turn into cerulean oceans, drowning daylight by it's throat." its good
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'Poisonous ivies surrounded your perfect halo.'
This is a line that really captivated me, it's so powerful.
Well done!
Nela -
Daddy loves you!!!
WOW! You never cease to amaze me with your words, sweet daughter! I love reading each line you create and mold, making it yours!!! I am glad Rend featured this today!
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well my sis, this filled with deep emotion and dream like visions, very well done! i love it
blessings to you always
you are featured "Todays Poem"
Rend
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I like it. I dont find it weird. It is another deep poem filled with emotion and imagery. Very well done.
Mike
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