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Fog Morning

Purple sheen clamours above fog
The thick grayish mist devours.
the land becomes darker;covered
Dipped into an early morning smog
Hazy is this Silver morning glaze.

As glossy as my tired eyes

That barely endure the dim light

As night slowly becomes day

The sun chasing it away.

 

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  • Antipodi
    May 9
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    absolutely beautiful description dear poet lots of imagic detail and form an excellent write


  • Evinde
    May 9

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    I love the light and broken-ish rhymes, they really add to the misty and rather foggy idea and feel of this. Vivid descriptions.


  • She burns
    May 9
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    It was foggy here at canada this morning!!!

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