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Reincarnate the soils of creation

Revelation burrows through the material world, devours creation’s soil, digests the thoughtless void, and produces significance with graceful morse. From emptiness comes meaning, essence from existence, soul from matter.

Freedom is liquid, supple, mellifluous. It surrounds us, engulfs our bodies, drowns our fear. We plumb freedom’s depths and consume the nourishment within. From these waters, we are born; when we die, we shall return to those waters.

Out there, among the stars, are the waters, freedom incarnate. That dark, endless void is our destiny, our path, our goal. We must not fear it, nor should we control it. Rather, we should embrace it,. Its ever-changing face, its protean existence, is our very essence. We are those stars, the void, the awesome waters of space: ancient, forever, free.


...a few thoughts, thats all.

thought up by, Daniel Jhavier Medina.

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  • myusikah
    September 26

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    Oh my gosh, I love your vocabulary! It's so complex.
    Just checking out some of your poetry, Deej.
    Can I still call you that??

    Awesome poem...or thoughts....whatever you'd like to call it.

  • Freedom is liquid, supple, mellifluous
    I loved that line!
    This was really awesome!

  • excellent

    Wow Daniel, this is amazing! You have such a creative heart for writing poems. A real gift. You should become a published author. Anyway this is a most superb and creative write. Applause to you, my friend.
    Brian