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never ending road

our love is like a never ending road.
it goes on for ever and ever.
we might take so rong turns but we are always going strong.
wemight stop and get every thing on track again but not for long.
we might crush into something but we let the bad past us and keep going.
we might hit a dump but we can get over it.
we might get lost but we help each other find our  ways out.
our love is like a never ending road.

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  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    May 8

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    Welcome to Allpoetry

    I think you expressed yourself well here. I would just take a look at lines 3 and 4. Nothing major. Keep writing. Be Well.

    Mark