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Pain

I don’t know where I’m going anymore,
So lost in this unscheduled world,
Everyday I pray I leave and even wish,
Someday I won’t breathe,
Deep in my soul I know you love me,
But it just won’t show and I won’t believe,
Ever since birth I’ve been sprayed with lies,
Today is a day when I make a statement,
Not a thought, not a belief, or a wish,
But tonight I will take a stand and commit this deed,
God never lets me finish these thoughts,
Tired of blaming everyone,
In the end,
It was me who was to scared to spill the blood,
Tomorrow, unpleasantly, I still Stand…

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Written March 10th, 2004

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  • Shadowygirl
    March 10, 2004
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    deep

    Very good read , deep poem , sad really and I can relate to this majorly .
    I liked alot thought it was way wicked kool keep penning