Ravenous is my desire
Gazing upon such a feast
Where do I begin when offered
Such succulent of treats
Full lips made to be kissed
Glisten so invitingly
Wide hips promise pleasures
Of which I wait eagerly
Falling back on the bed
She quickly climbs on me
Straddling my lap
Her eyes fill with wanton glee
My hardness a perfect fit
That her softness now enfolds
Our bodies fit as one
The perfect lovers mold
Pendulous breasts above me
Swaying, begging for a kiss
My hands eagerly reach up
Kissing nipples, moans of bliss
I thrust, she bucks wildly
So I take hold of her hips
Keeping her there atop me
As loud moans escape our lips
Quickly I change position
Now on top, I start to move
Sudden tremors, nipples harden
Hips squeeze, I know she approves
Warm thighs caress my hips
Wrapping around me, they enfold
Guiding me with pleasure
Orgasms, now quickly take hold
Collapsing there beside her
Gasping, still lost in her glow
I wrap her in my arms,
Vowing to never let her go
Author notes
The woman in the picture is one of the most beautiful I've ever seen!
A contest entry
- Somethin' for the fella's... by DeJaBlue.
700 points, ended May 13, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
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*Blushes* Wow what to say... wickedly sinful piece.. thanks for this entry!
xo
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Very sensual poem. Obviously it is more than just imagination that lead you to write this. congrats on the win..you desreved it!
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Thanks aluna.
I will admit nothing! 
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Such a wonderful picture of love, desire, and passion. Nicely done. Thanks so much for entering.
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Thanks DeJaBlue! I hope you enjoyed it as much as I did writing it.
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Stunning !!!
The imagery, your incredible skills, and treasure trove of vocabulary is beyond...I pictured this, felt every motion and emotion. The rhythm,rhyme and flow is in perfect sync with this intoxicating expession. A Masterpiece my friend,and if you don't win the gold,its simply coz the judges have never been to that enchanted land you so perfectly strummed. This is breathtaking! Took me back down memory lane. The very best of LUCK !
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I'm glad you enjoyed it! I had a great time writing it and the picture was such an inspiration. Thanks for the vote of confidence and the visit!
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crazy night...:]
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Thanks I'm glad you enjoyed it! Are you old enough to be reading this!
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i'm old enough...sorta...doesn't really matter i'm gonna read it anyways, i like beauty, and beautiful poetry. there aren't many beautiful things left in the world today this is just one of the things that i wont let go. :]
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Okay Just be careful where you tread through my poems!
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WOW!...hot write...
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Thanks my friend! The picture did inspire! I should be so lucky!
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I haven't seen the picture but I think curiosity is going to win out and make me go take a look
You've written some very steamy words for it so it must be so.
Stacy
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My kind of woman! She is full figured and beautiful with amazing eyes.
Thanks for the visit and read stacy!
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