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Perfect

I long for the day,
To wake and find,
The image staring back at me,
Is finally PERFECT in my mind.

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I chose option 1. Perfection

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  • crimsondew
    May 13
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    well done on 'perfection'
    Congrats on gold!


  • Kathleen a Nazarene
    May 12

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    Don't we

    all wish for that! Worthy of that Gold. A sentiment that all women can agree with. Good job here.
    Congrats.


  • dancer90
    May 12

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    Well this was....perfect!

    At first I was like ??? Are you joking? that was so short!
    But then I saw 20 words max and was like WOAH
    That was freaking amazing for less than 20 words!
    Described what we want perfectly and how much we want it.
    I liked how you made the word perfect in the actual poem all caps
    I also like the format, two short lines and two longer lines after. Might not have planned it but makes me happy ^^

    Someday we'll be.....well better than we are now. Just gotta keep dreaming until those dreams are reality.
    <3333

  • Virginia Logsdon
    May 11
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    Nice.

    This will happen when we are finally transformed into Jesus image, from glory to glory.


  • hollowriver
    May 8
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    simply the truth
    wrapped up in real emotion
    nice explanation
    bravo

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