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Mother lottery

A feeling so raw
full of emotion
to hold and never let go
safety in her arms
confided by scent
recognized by genetic
loved by soul
I am her gift
a bouncing baby girl
God chose well
for a mother so fit
A seed to grow
A battle I won
To be created
for a mother
as pure and kind
as Mary her self
what a lottery I won

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  • you so love your mum and thats beautiful tribute ,