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A mothers first

A mothers first scream
Pain, frustration

A mothers first sigh
relief with exhalation

A mothers first glance
hazel green, contemplation

A mothers first smile
sincere with confirmation

A mothers first touch
undeniable love and adoration

A mothers first hold of her young
a want to keep you in isolation



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for my mother that I love

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  • this is so beutiful mum will be so proud of you


  • Daizee silver member
    May 8

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    Aww, being a mom myself, everyone of those feelings I can really relate to. What a tribute to your mom

    Stacy