No air...
So this is how it feels to be suffocated;
bleeding inside,
half of me ripped away.
All because you left me.
I wonder someday if you'll come back.
You may still be able to fill the void.
That empty place in my heart.
The space that still yearns and aches for you.
But who am I kidding, we both know you won't.
I can still dream though.
Imagine you're still here.
Your love pouring into me and my love into you.
Maybe pretending,
grasping at straws,
holding onto your memory,
will help me breathe again.
A contest entry
- If you can't sway to the words, at least sing to them [Round 2] by xxRainbowDawnxx.
750 points, ended May 21, 12 entries
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Comments
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This makes me feel so sad. I kind of think that you are describing how it is without someone special with you and at the same time the beautiful, but overbearing feeling of love that you get when you're around them.

