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Painted Picture

Missing image

Paint me a pretty picture

of pretty trees and a path

so that I can travel down it

and know my true dream.

 

I walk down the painted path

but realize it isn't real

for it is just a painting

and only a fantasy of a dream.

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  • Iliad Keys
    October 28
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    Nice little poem. It fits with the picture, but stands well on its own also.
    -edit-
    haha, I didn't realize the previous comment said the same thing! Well, if that is what both of us thought, it must be true!


  • Barry Hodges
    August 25

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    Quite a nice little poem here! Pre-Raphaelites do that for me - more real than reality. Think of Ophelia drowning.