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Cry Baby. . . This is Your Song

*This is an acoustic song with a soft melodic tune that resembles that of lullabies*
(instrumentals between each stanza)

Here comes the night
The stars begin to shine
As the darkness fades in from twilight

Texting all night
We talk all day
… I never want this feeling to fade

The moon is out, it’s full tonight
I’m with the girl of my dreams
So that sound must be her lullaby

One moment in time…
It keeps playing over in my mind

An endless dream… on infinite rewind
(Guitar & piano; long instrumental)

You said, “I love you”
I said, “baby I know”
You said, “Hold me tight”
I smiled and said. “ Girl… I won’t let go”

Lul-la-by…sing to me
… Never want to wake up
Give my heart wings and let me dream

Lul-la-by . . .
Lul—la—by

(Guitar only)

I love putting that smile on your face
I love the way your lips taste
I love when we hold each other tight
I love that you’re all I think about at night

Lullaby . . . don’t stop playing that lullaby

(Piano only and played very lightly)

Don’t let that first tear drop
We both know that if it falls then the tears just won’t stop
(Begin fade out)

Girl don’t cry . . .
I’m not worth the tears.

(Finish fade out)

Author notes

meant to be played with acoustic guitar, violin, flute, and piano, but just the acoustic guitar or the guitar and the piano also work well

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  • new version

    working with a band to turn this into a song that can be played to sound like Mayday Parade and Boys Like Girls


  • Antebellum
    July 5

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    "
    You said, “I love you”
    I said, “baby I know”
    You said, “Hold me tight”
    I smiled and said. “ Girl… I won’t let go”"


    haha I have something almost exactly like these lines.
    great write,
    very sweet.