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Sweet Bruises

Wounds of the moment do eventually show; the current red teeth marks will stain.
But who could ever mind these scars, when one enjoys such pain?
You have my heart, my mind, my thoughts, so we might as well add the skin.
We know this both my biting love; these marks will not be a sin!
Yes, I enjoy your improvising when my lips are too too simple; not enough.
Oh, who would have guessed in a million years that I really enjoy this stuff?

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  • I love this, the flow was fantastic and the rhyme was amazing. Great job on this, i loved it.