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Lost but never alone

You can never really be alone,
For you keep a person close to your heart,
For you could never die,
Even though you get torn apart.

Feelings are stronger then the mind,
Let me close my eyes and see what its like to be blind,
You may never know how it is to be alive,
Because long ago you could have died.

To this poem I beseech you my friend,
With a single word I can make the amends,
For all in heart this is not pretend.

I'm the demon that hides away in the pits of hell,
Not even the devil can throw me in a cell,
For you have the halo and I the blackened wings,
But together I be we can finally sing.

A thousand words will never tell this sorrowful story,
But even I can't have all the glory,
You tell the rest.

Finally I'll make the conclusion,
That took so long to tell,
When I tried to fly with my torn up wings,
I took the fell.

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there are alot of messages in this write,
Tell me what you think they are?

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  • kay772
    May 8, 2009
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    i like it


  • Short but cute
    May 8, 2009
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    U can never die cuz someone will always make u feel so alive. Am I right?


  • BlackRose21
    May 8, 2009

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    I don't know what all of them are but one is I think having faith... or maybe just beleiving in oneself... because as long as you are strong emotionally you can never die... but a person who has no feelings or hope is living dead... and it's the most awful way to live... umm... all in all I thought it was good... very enigmatic... "for you the halo and I the blackened wings" beautiful line... for it makes a lot of sense to me...