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A Precious Gift

A tiny babe embraced from afar,
her smile shines in evening star.
Touch so soft remembered sweet
made our family tree complete.

God needed angels ones so small,
Those most precious God will call.
For what God gives He also takes,
at times it seems He does forsake.

Chloe sings with angels on high,
love whispers in clear blue sky.
She sits on clouds, gazes down,
makes smiles of saddened frowns.

One day with her you will reunite,
for all are given eternal light.
Chloe will always be a precious gift,
bring you thoughts of joy to uplift.


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  • Treasure 5 gold member
    May 26

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    Precious words and your poem is so beautiful Thank you for sharng and good luck in the contest.
    rose*

  • Happy Mother's Day Sandy

    What a nice poem. What a nice 23 psalm. Happy Mother's Day to SandyGram


    • Sandygram
      May 10
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      Thank You My Sweet Friend!

      You always bring me a smile with your comments. I hope you are enjoying your weekend. My Mother's Day is wonderful. You take care.

      Hugs and Smiles across many miles, Sandy

  • this is so precious, i am at a loss for words,
    beautiful! you penned a lovely piece for a grandmother who loves and misses her grandbaby,

    blessings and love

    Rend


    • Sandygram
      May 10
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      Thank You Rend

      It is a pleasure dear niece to have you stop by. Hugs and Smiles. Aunt Sandy

  • Beautiful, I need say no more. Sheila


    • Sandygram
      May 10
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      HELLO Shelia!!

      So nice to have you stop by. I appreciate you commenting on my poem. You take care. Hugs and Smiles. Sandy

  • mcheadle
    May 9
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    So precious a write as only you could do.

    Prayers to the MOM...mac

    • Sandygram
      May 10
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      Thank You Mac

      Yes prayers for the mom and Cathy too. Hugs and smiles fear friend. Always here for you, Love your comment!! Sandy

  • Beautiful and Bittersweet

    I am speechless. But it touches some where very deep... I won't discuss it right now it still hurts a little bit and its been a few years. *whispers* I miscarried a little girl (at least I am certain it was a girl) about 3 or 4 years ago. But this poem really speaks to me. Niaish Sandy.


  • Puppydog gold member
    May 8
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    PRECIOUS!!!!

    Words to lift the spirt and heart! Deeply touching and sweet!!

    • Sandygram
      May 10
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      Thank You Dear Kevin
      Always so nice to hear from my friend. I hope you enjoyed this lovely weekend. Hugs and Smiles, Sandy


  • Samplette gold member
    May 8

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    A beautiful write to remember this child so precious to the heart of a grieving grandmother. I am sure it touched her deeply. Best to you in the contest.
    Sam


    • Sandygram
      May 10
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      Thank You Sam. Always a pleasure to read your comments. Peace and Grace, Sandy


  • daviscth silver member
    May 8

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    What a beautiful and precious way to think of my baby Chloe!! I loved the imagery as well as the love that I could feel in each line. Thank you so much for this breath taking entry.


    • Sandygram
      May 10
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      You are very welcome Cathy

      May you be blessed with peace and grace. Hugs my friend, Sandy

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