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Regrow Together

Let’s make this world a better place,
Let’s just be one human race.
Right our wrongs, repent our sins,
Wipe the frowns, replace with grins.
Grow your roots deep down in soil,
Don’t let your petals wilt and spoil.
Forget the blood you once drew,
Forget the paths you once flew.

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  • Lady Michaella
    May 8

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    well, that writers block has fuked off alright!! this is amazing taz, its beautiful, that imagery is wonderful.. that whole roots and petals and earth.. its beautiful.. magnifico! baha... this is a pwnage poem.. keep it up man.. enter it in something..
    xx

    • Black-Fang
      May 8
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      lol thanks $ dam i should have looked at contests b4 i put it up ! lol ill see if there are any relevant prewrite contests
      just cuz i write 1 dusnt mean my writers block is gone but thanks

      xxxxx


  • Sunkissed xo
    May 8

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    love it. especially the last line. you're so good at coming up with amazing last-liners! ahaha. this relates so much to today and the world we live in, it's such a relevant poem.. but the whole thing's so beautiful.. yet so sad. well done taz. another amazingggg piece