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Enlightenment

It occurred to me God wasn’t likely to say,
“It never occurred I should do it your way.”

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Kevin Pace - WordsDoMatter

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  • daviscth silver member
    May 9

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    This is a wonderful sentence for the contest. If only people would stop thinking that it should be their way instead of His way. Good luck...

  • Priya1989
    May 8

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    Hi there, thank you for entering my contest.

    Wow. This piece is absolutely stunning. As soon as I read it, I stepped back and thought... such profoundity penned in such few and simple words... with so much truth to it. This should be a universal mantra I think, haha. I wish everyone in the world could read this - it gave me an instant calm after I read it. Thank you, thank you for submitting this.

    Best of luck with this brilliant entry