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The devil at my shoes

The book of the Devil
At my feet
While the story of my life
Plays through my head
A love to be forgotten
the night to overcome alone
Flushed features
with his essence
I have no more
stillness through my body
hate soaring through my veins
protruding at the gate
to my heart
Thus the love lesser known
will be known never
again

Hi, just messing round with a poem I wrote when I was 16 and had was going through a bad break-up

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