Patience tolerates the hate that brews inside
Anguish relevant to the times that we spent
Memories jolt feelings that I no longer confide
The Reutilization of what true friendship meant
I curse the nature, skies, and all that remains
The futility of life creeks like broken floors
Tears fall ,as I raise my arms to the heavens
Every venture seem to cast life's closed doors
Providence seems to be the wickedest of things
Stricken, to young understand one's destiny
Alone scratching my soul, remembering your name
We notion, the reaper watching, waiting for even me
The grim vision of death strikes pure fear
Individual prognissis of our time to come
We forget that the master holds us dear
Where beauty, love, and life comes from
Those who perish still remain deep within
Our heart beats with the trueness of their love
In familiar places, homes, and seen in friends
The laughter that echoes from way up above
Do not cast aside the time we once spent
Life is precious so do not live it in vain
Memorialize the ones that came and went
Love remains in our heart, as we say your name
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A contest entry
- A Tribute To Heather. by SimplyNoodle.
4100 points, ended August 3, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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NICE...
You did well here... good job. Oh yeah... I watched the youtube clip.... FUNNY!!
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i appreciate very much the thought that was put into writing this, usually i don't find structured poetry appealing but this was different to me somehow. also, do you mean "prognosis" instead of "prognissis?"
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thanks
i just read you comment and wanted to say thanks
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Applasuse matches to "true friendship"
You say "Patience tolerates the hate that brews inside" and indirectly teach me to have a a glance at my inner depths to make it tidy even spin and span cleared of hatred! For everybody "Anguish" will be "relevant to the times that we spent"
I catch on your reamarks of the "true friendship" that "meant" something internationally relevant!
THNX!
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truly beautiful sentimental poem, especially liked the final two lines,
Memorialize the ones that came and went
Love remains in our heart, as we say your name
I relate to this poem and the thought that those we love are never truly lost but live on in our hearts and memories.
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Wow, this was very well written, and very thought out as well. and your choice of words makes a very clear image as well, not to mentionm theres a picture included as well. I have to say this is one of a few pieacec that actualy make me think, into more dept about life, and Im not sure why either, But I find it very intregeing. So thank you for this well thought out and intreaging poem filled with emotional dept, and may you have the best of luck in the contest.
I would also like to applogize for the latness in this comment and judging of the contest.
Thank you.
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this had an abundance of depth and meaning. you take the reader on a ride with the inevitable. each stanza held a multitude of meanings. great job poet. peace & Light, KP
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this is a very beautiful peace of work. i think you did a great job.
The flow was right on. Thanks for sharing this with all of us!
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Another good piece. Your rhyming is just amazing in this. I loved the bittersweet feelings that this poem released. Strong and powerful. I loved it.
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wow! This is wonderful, Thank you.
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Thanks
Your comments are allways nice!
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so beautiful. your words are such an amazing testimony to the subject.
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a smile of sadness
in remembrance, this is a lovely write here....it compliments the picture prompt and is filled with such emotion, ty for sharing this with us!
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I adore this. Its melancholy tone is enlightening! you speak with such a passion and resentment to mortallity its absolutley exciting! congrats friend this was great! I hope to see more like this out of you!
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