I adore this wonderful place
not only to cleanse my wings
I can also wash my face
I love the way the water clings
it adds softness to my wings
as my voice sings
I have a body and I can swim here
underwater with no fear
I like to get my hair wet
it cleanses my mind so I will not forget
this place is a secret
this waterfall brings such delight
this is a wonderful sight.
I fly away in the night from other fairies.
so no one else will hear me among the breeze.
My waterfall is hidden faraway,
near a mountain where I sleep until day,
then I can enjoy the beauty
which seems to be just for me.
Author notes
option 2 this is the beginning of a good story, the picture from photobucket ,
I will change with my own drawing of a fairy and just maybe draw waterfall, it will be in color, later,
a different picture will appear
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This is pretty goods thank you for entering but your already in. Thank you for sharing and it was very much a pleasure to read. Keep writing for me my friend.
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A SWEET BEGINNING TO A WONDERFUL STORY!!!!
Oh to just play and enjoy the simple pleasures that are around us in nature!
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excellent
Magical and enchanting
Congrats on the Honorable Mention
I won Honorable Mention too so we both won Yeah
hope you read my poem as well
Susan~~~
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Excellent
Such a very well written piece. And so deserving of the gold. Congratulations.
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I want to thank everyone for entering Everyone is a winner to me watch for more contests this afternoon and congratulations to the winners
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I really like this poem. i havent read another like it and i plan on reading more of your poems
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awww this is cute welldone xx
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Oh, this is DARLING!!!!
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Beautiful
I love the imagery you used and how you told the story. I can tell that you really put yourself in the poem.
Great job.
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Very good write Thank you for entering, The waterfall is hidden far away I really like that line alot Good luck May the best win.
*rose
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You have painted a true WaterNymph in wordart dear poet lots of imagic verse for the reader to enjoy
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I agree... it leaves the reader wanting more... more and more. A beautiful write here, my friend. Keep the ink flowing and good luck! Love and hugs...
~Donna~
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i wish this poem was longer I feel like since its so short I would be left wondering for more. At first I thoguht it was about a little bird. But very nice
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