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Ten Things I Love About You

I love the way you say my name
I love the way you laugh
I love the way you smile and stare
Like I'm you're better half

I love the way you never lie
And make everything alright
I love how when we say goodnight
We never mean goodbye

I love the way you hold my hand
I love the way you care
I love the way you touch my cheek
And that you're always there
And most of all

I love the way I love you



Author notes

So many things to love about you
I just don't have the time
But I can hope it makes you smile
That my love for you's in rhyme

To Taylor. My one and only. :]

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  • Awwh this is so sweet. I'm so happy for you two love is amazing


    -Steve-

  • This poem is so cute! The rhyme is pretty adorable too! I generally don't such when I sit down to comment!

    Twelve ways, though! You have best of my wishes, I hope this love affair never ends!

    Sock me up!


    • Sock
      May 10
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      ahahah its actually 11 i miscounted. oh well

      • Well you mean like you love how he stares when he smiles? Or if they are noncoherent attributes? If the latter is true, then you have 12 ways to love him.


        • Sock
          May 10
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          i meant them together, i think. because it is ten if you count them as one.

  • This is a very sweet piece. Nicely penned. Keep it up!

  • I love you!

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