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[ Hot Sun, Browning Skin ]

Hot Sun, Browning Skin
Fountains of water cooling
Waves of sound, Flooding
Music
Bodies Wild, Thrashing
Lose yourself to the music
to the crowd
let go
of your restraint
the entrapments of your mind, society
let your limbs fly, loose
Fling yourself into the crowd
Human Connection
Understanding
you're all feeling the same things
As One your voices scream
Raw and Unrelenting
the fierce passion
of Summer

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