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[ Tick-tock ]

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Tick….
   

    Tick….       

        Tick….

Tick. 

The numbers on the clock are blurry

I can’t quite make out the time

Not that it matters how late it is

I’ll wait for the sky to shine

There’s a beat pounding in my head

And though I don’t know the cause

I can hum along with it endlessly

It doesn’t skip, stutter or pause

My mind’s feeling fuzzy, yet hyper

I hope it will eventually shut down

Because the darkness seems to be creeping in

And the silence has turned into sound

The beat in my head has moved to my body

I listen to it synchronize with the clock

I’m excited, jittery, but too groggy to move

So I hum along, “Tick-tock.”

My eyes burn from exhaustion

But my mind is starting to clear

I close my lids to try again

But the sunrise is drawing near

Suddenly my alarm starts to blare

And I jump out of my skin with fright

I turn it off and prepare for day

I welcome, yet hate the light

Another night I’ve completely wasted

The bags under my eyes are deep

Time to get up and to continue life

Oh how I only wish I could sleep!


Author notes

Well, I wrote this one pretty quickly. But, then again, I write all of my poems quickly.
I like it. It was fun, yet challenging, yet interesting, yet upsetting, to write. And now I'm tired >.<
Hope you enjoy.

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  • ears2hearyou gold member
    October 19

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    I just went and grabbed a pair of those reading glasses
    that magnify everything.....

    and dang....this is truly a well written poem!
    well worth the semi-blindness....(hint-hint- increase that font)

    and I hear ya...
    sleepless nights
    can be a real pain in the ass

    when all you want to do is: SLEEP!


  • Rayne Dance
    September 15

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    Wow!

    I felt it Cori! I know exactlly how you felt in this. great descriptions!! I felt like that last night so it hits home!

  • Wonderful

    I loved this piece. I didn't even realize you were rhyming until I went through and read it the second time that's how nicely it flowed.

    Also, anyone that has ever suffered from insomnia knows this exact feeling you have portrayed.

  • Ugh I KNOW how this feels, and I hate feeling that way. Okay so: I loved your poem! The rhyme and rythm is great. The subject matter is interesting, I like your word choices. Just a great poem overall!

  • interesting indeed. i love it. i have insomnia frequently so duh i love this poem. i'm had it before for so long that i experienced psychosis so thats kinda funny given ur name too.

  • I liked it a lot! Cool subject matter..very..bipolarish if you get the idea..very nice!


  • lost-angel
    May 12

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    i like it i like it!!!
    love your rhyme,
    really feel the tick tock going on there
    but no way boring,
    well done!


  • Akarian silver member
    May 8

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    ZOMG! SHE LIVES! =P

    I love this, I've had insomnia before, thank god I don't know, but that's prolly mostly because of hard workouts every day. I actually had no idea what this was about until the end, oddly enough. Then I went back and re-read it and got a lot more out of it. Really awesome write, you continue to inspire us all. =D

    • I LIVE! I LIVE!

      Hahah, thank you :-)
      It felt nice to finally write another poem :->
      It would be really cool to inspire people.
      Like REALLY cool.
      :-]


  • lemonhead
    May 7

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    Dear writer of this poem,

    I miss you Cori! A lot!
    This is really really good ^.^ I love rhyming and I loved your rhyming and your rhythm too. I really missed reading your poems too. They are really really amazing, and they are perfectly executed.
    I miss you! (again)

    Yours truly,
    Lemonhead

    • Dear writer of this comment,

      I MISS YOU MORE MY ASSSSSIAN!!!
      Thank you :-> I love praise :-) As I love you :-D
      I MIIISSSSSS YYYYYOOOOOOUUUUUUUUU!!!!!!! too.

      YOUR'S truly,
      Me

      • lemonhead
        May 7
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        Dear writer to the reply,

        That is impossible

        Love,
        Asian 1

        • .....


          ILOVEYOU!!!
          :-)
          And miss you .
          :-(
          And nothing's impossible!

          LOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVEEEEE,
          me

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