Sitting at the end of your bed,
just watching, not exactly sure whats happening.
My mom's hands on my shoulders,
cousins crying, Grandmother trying to hug them all.
Whats happening? Whats wrong?
Shes dying yall say, what is dying exactly?
Dying means not to exist, but she will always exist.
in my heart I'll keep my memories and never let them go.
You open your eyes one last time, take one last breath.
Say your last prayer thanking God for your life.
The machine beeps and your soul is gone, just left with the body.
Everyone gets pushed out of the room,
the doctors rush in and take you away.
Goodbye, I'll see you in heaven.
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This is about my Great Grandmother she died when i was about 6
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wow...this is sooo sad....and im so sorry.
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You've managed to picture the mind of a child for us perfectly. Great job, darling.
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wow.... thats sorrowfull... im sorry.... today my friends mom was on life support and then she was taken off and died.... the way u said the machine beeps and your soul is gone ... it made me think of her... wow truely deep.
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this is deep.............. really deep.................. it was very good and you will see her in heavan some day.
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awe, this is sad,,, but its also beautiful,,, great job, srry about ur great grandmother, its great you dedicated an amazing poem like this to her, i love it
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Awh kay! this is sad! but beautiful...
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