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Full of Pain

I'm so full of pain, regret, sorrow and despair.

I'm full of pain, from a great loss, which came at great cost.
I'm full of regret, from things I said, which caused many tears to be shed.
I'm full of sorrow, because it feels like there is no tomorrow.
I'm full of despair, and the pain is making me no longer care.

There are people that I miss, but their memory I try to dismiss.
Their memory flows all through my veins, with intense pain.

My chest is heavy, my heart is grim and my sight is dim.

I miss you guys, and all the times that we shared.
I miss you guys, and family that we all were.

I tried my very best... and I'm sorry it wasn't good enough.

Author notes

This will probably be my last poem. It's been fun... but I feel so foolish to ever become this attached to other people, and I'm sorry.

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  • Patpowers silver member
    May 7

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    Sorry this will be your last poem. My thoughts are with you as you expressed yourself constchar. Good imagery in this. THANKS!