eyes the color of a crystal blue ocean
hair as black as a starless night
lips as soft as the clouds in the sky
and a touch so electrifying it makes on freeze
you are my smile
you are my love
you are my innocent giggle
you are my life
i want you
i crave you
i need you
i love you
two hearts so pure
two heats so in love
who are they to judge
and
who are they to say
to young to love
to young to stay
they are wrong
our love was to strong
forever we are meant to be
for all will see...
in loving memory to gentleman who has my heart. RIP November 26, 2007 i will love you forever and always!! <3
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I'm truly sorry for your loss. I know from expierence as well... that fate can take away just as much as it gives. However, I have yet to actually sit down and write about what I have lost. You on the other hand... have a wonderful gift on sharing your emotions with everyone around you. May strength and courage be with you through these hard times.
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very good write.
the last couple of lines... were amazing.
actually, scratch that. the whole freaking thing just reads so fluently, and perfectly.
"i want you, i crave you, i need you, i love you.....
who are they to say, to young to love to young to stay"
freaking-A, Amber, thats beautiful.
AMAZING write, wow...... ill be reading this a lot, just because it makes me happy to read it.
again, it reads SOOOO fluently its ridiculous.
I can't wait to read what comes out of you next.
-Will
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thank you will :] i just had a lot on my mind about micheal and how much i miss him.this something i had found in our box that we had put together before he died and idk i just felt like i wanted to post it. i cried while i posted it but i think it was something i needed to do. i was going through it the other day and BAM i remember writing this. its crazy. i actually like this poem even though i wrote it haha.
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