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Dark place

No eyes,
no mouth,
no words.

Can't cry,
no breath.

Silence so deep,
I want to die.

I cant...

The darkness,
the silence,
go on forever.

It's not a dream...
I don't sleep

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  • She Stole My Voice
    May 7

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    Hm.
    To me, it sounds a little choppy.
    "go one forever."- doesn't make sense.
    I would love to help you with it;
    send me a message if you would accept. :]

    Thank you for sharing.
    :]

    -Mary

  • Lynn Winchester
    May 7
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    i enjoyed this dark poem thank you for shareing