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{(To the One Who 'Loves' Me)}

You stupid boy
Still you think you know
What goes on inside my head
Yet all the time I wish you dead
I scream andfight and push away
WHY DO YOU STAY!?
Yearning to hold my frame
Wishing I was your dame
Pulling at a wedding vow
You want me to be yours forever
I just want to go about my own endevor!

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