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It Was You

I sit in a corner and silently cry,
as people ignore me and walk on by,
a kind gentle hand reaches into view,
I slowly look up and it was you.

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... :/ yeah, not that good, i know.

I think its kinda horrible that some people can walk by someone when they need help, even if its just picking up books that feel on the ground. but sometimes, there is that one person that will stop what they are doing to help. that could change that persons whole day.

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  • Tqop
    June 1

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    Awesome:

    This is os beautiful. It could be a song. I love the way you rhyme and express yourself excellently. This is effortless. Keep sharing.

    Evemauy