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Heart Sick

Breath--Heave
The ache takes control
Sigh and die
Lungs bursting
Even pain of shattered bones
Holds nothing
To the heart's lullaby
Confused and washed away
You cannot make the soul stay
Running--Fleeting
Holding nothing dear
Trying to chase the tears

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