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barnsley youth

me and ar doris only tell truths
about barnsley'uns ,what they do with there youth
they where these tight skirts and they dunt where no britches
till be reyt when they fall and theyre crying for stiches
alez clutching a bottle of gin in there hand
at there age i was proper and listening brass bands
an mi dad was a miner and if i want ome id shout mi for miles
get back in shut thi door, put wood in t'ole

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heres a translation as its written in yorkshire dialect

me and our doris we only tell trouths
about barnsley kids ,what they do in their youth
they are wearing tight skirts without any trouses
and theyle be moaning when there crying for stitches
always clutcing a bottle of gin in their hand
at their age i was proper and listening brass bands

and my dad was miner and if i wasnt home he would shout me for miles
get back in shut your door put wood in t'ole

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  • Snowing Kisses gold member
    May 8
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    EEE LASSS THAT A GRAND LITTLE POWEM INTIT
    AM REYTPRAHD ON YER
    FROM YER MAMXXXXXXXXXXXXX


  • Emmyb gold member
    May 8

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    hahahaha yorkshire dialect. thats funny. very original indeed! thanks for the translations - helped me a lot. I come from bristol sobelieve me, I understand the effort it takes to hear clearly through a thick crazy accent. hehe. well done.


    • little fish two
      May 10
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      tahnkyou ....:)

      thankyou for your kind comment i wasnt sure what people would think lol