Arms once unharmed
now remember razorblades
pushed deep into the vain.
She wonders if she was born
just to cause pain.
dozens of scars
cover her wrists
trying so hard
not to exist.
She cant contemplate
what its like to be free
these horrible deamons inside
she wants to release.
Thinking that shes lost
she leaves a note
grabs some pills
and forces them down her throat.
She knows shes made a mistake
but the pain comes very soon
so she lies there waiting for death to ensue
Just another wasted life
another name on a list
of people
who just couldnt take it.
the title is from a shirt i just got in the mail :O
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I LOVE IT!!!
I LOVE THIS POEM ALMOST AS MUCH AS I LOVE YOU!!!
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Dannnggg duuuu. This rocks. Hmm. You're extremely good at writing poetry. I wish there was some way you could give me lessons. haha. PS. Im going to write a poem about you..kinda. =]]]]]]]]
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beautifully written.
and i've heard of the organazation -
daaang!
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This poem is cool i really liked it.Nice job.
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not to bad at all, you manage to write the emotions out poetically and stay on target with your subject without spreding out too far to one or the other. In my humble opinion I think this perticular poem might look a tiny bit better centered. but thats all the critisim ive got for you. you did a great job on a somber subject
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moonlight vampire
wow i loved the intense of this poem very well written can almost realate to anyone who has given up nice keep the good work -
Incredible write. Such deep emotion the reader can feel.
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really good.
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Love this! Very good...
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