"No! No! NO!
Leave me alone!!"
I cry as I see you come near me
with that look in you eyes.
"Please leave me alone!!!!"
I begged you.
You push me into the wall.
And kick me in the ribbs
CRACK!!
They broke,
and I cried out in pain.
WACK!!
You slapped me in the face.
"Aww... you gonna cry, you stupid little BITCH!!!"
you scream at me as I'm on the ground.
I try to stand up,
only to see your boot in my face.
SMASH!!
They hit me in the chest
and out my mouth comes blood and breath.
"What did I do?! Please tell me so I can fix it!"
I yelled at you.
And I got a tight slap in my face.
You come at me and I cringe in fear.
And off my face, falls a lone tear.
But instead of feeling a punch or a slap
I felt you grab my hair and pull me up
"You were born and I'm going to fix it right now!"
You scream in my face and pull out a knife.
I scream and shout and try to get free.
But your grip is too strong.
Why brother dear?
Why do you hate me so?
Why do you take pleasure in causing me pain.
"Goodbye, Jazzlyn"
is what you say as you plunge the knife
deep into me.
"Why...."
Are my last words
as I slump to the floor
and Die.
Author notes
he doesn't do this to me anymore.
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I am so sorry that this has happened to you no one deserves this much less from a brother or parent. You did a good job of portraying this. Thank you for sharing this. I feel for you.
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i'm glad he doesn't do that to you anymore. my brother and sister use to beat me up so bad and that's a reason why i'm so guarded now and always ready to fight. best of luck to you in this contest and in your life.
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Why are some people such bastards? No one should have to put up with that. No one deserves that.
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........totally raw and full of emotion and power...nicely done!
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oh my funken god this is way weres than my brother who all most try to kill me arnt brothers best>
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AH! This was horribly crazy! Your brother used to beat the hell out of you? FOr what reason? Because you were born??? Damn.......Awesome write. I REALLY felt the emotion. It was like a short thriller story...Tee hee. Thanks for the share. Hope all is well.
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I know the feeling. i loved it by the way.. It s descriptive..
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Oh sweetie.... I really felt your pain here. All of it was wonderfully descriptive.... Keep strong..
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