far away i hope to dream
you sing your sad song to me
i scream and scream and scream
i live in a world filled with love
world were we learn to live
i fell in love i gave it a chance
just to end up[ hurt in the end
i was warned loving you could hurt but i didn't listen...did i?
i want to die i hurt so much
everywhere i feel your touch
i want you i need you but you don't feel the same
please just let me die!
he walked past me in the hallway
i always thought you loved once so it can't happen again
but he caoght my eye and for some reason
i feel like there is hope
he talked to me that day it's three years now and we are married
i knew that hope would save me
it was all aabout finding it somehow...
A contest entry
- A Sad Story... But a Chance at Hope by l0ve.
550 points, ended May 19, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
ya i know it doesn't flow well
Comments
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YAY
i really like it
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wow
you move on fast i hate you i cant even tell you how much fuck you dont come to me when he brakes your heart
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This is a good poem... agreeing with you the flow isn't quite right, but i like the story inside.
Good job and good luck in my contest!
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great poem
i really could relate
why do we always end up hurt
stupid love
love just hurts
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