Chargin 'round the paddock,
speed at full bolt,
he loves to chase the others-
my little chestnut colt.
Needs to learn some manners,
don't think he'll learn much;
he's an outgoing little fellow,
at only 4 and a 1/2 months.
He thinks he is a stallion,
with a paddock full of mares,
but he turns their noses up,
'cause 'bout him they don't care.
Rejection he takes well;
he'll be a stallion in a few years,
and this little bunch of mares,
yes, they'll all be his!
He dreams about this day.
He can't wait for it to come.
Now all he has to worry 'bout,
is getting weaned from mum!
A contest entry
- pif/round contest part one - prewrite's by serenity silvermoon.
800 points, ended July 10, 566 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Welcome To Allpoetry
Welcome to AP! I hope you are finding your way around the site, if you need anything, feel free to IM me!
This is a very beautiful poem. I love horses, although I haven't ridden one in years, they are alot of fun!
best wishes,
Jeremy
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Welcome to AllPoetry
This is a great poem. I find the nature and animal poems are the hardest for me to write...lol. But, you have made it look effortless and easy... You have much talent to share with this site.
Welcome to the site, and if you need any help at all, please let us know
Sincerely,
luckynsincere, Site Greeter
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