I wana help you out
And I really want to do
Coz I can take it no more
The thought of loosing you
I do believe in god
And I have a great hope
I do believe in miracles
Against a falling slope
I love you so much
And I know your case
Regardless what they say
I still have hope
And I am ready to face
Whatever is in our way
I really do have hope in you
And I am not to give it up
I do have faith enough for me
To force all mouths shut up
We are not to listen to hopeless words
We are not to sit hand tied
We are to fight for hope no matter how small
And keep all negatives aside
I love you so much
And I know your case
Regardless what they say
I still have hope
And I am ready to face
Whatever is in our way
You are a mother, a sister
And everything to me
You are my world, my soul
And all life that I could see
Yet so easy you speak
Even when making fun
Of what we should prepare for
When you are foreverly gone
I love you so much
And I know your case
Regardless what they say
I still have hope
And I am ready to face
Whatever is in our way
Author notes
sometimes our beloved get hurt, but we have to be strong, to be able to help them out; never hopeless 
so what was the first impression?
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both egyptian and writes in teen style
but thanx for your comment,it's really usefull
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A feeling of feeling
I am not sure whether the writer is Egyptian or just writes in teen style. The feelings seem genuine, and much of it full of insights. If possible, I think it would benefit from put into more grmmatical form, so as to bring out these positives.
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That was a piece of work YAY !!
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well done...countess.
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right on inner strength
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