Creatures fanged bear their snarling teeth
Trapped by the anticipation
And then it is over in the sudden rush
As sudden as lightning strikes the tree
The hill in front of me grew into a mountain
The lake into a waterfall
My mind into a haven
I chuckle as I close the cover
Thinking to myself “that was a good book, I think I’ll read it again soon”
i wrote it for school, thought id post it here
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ummm i dont know if u relize this but is bear the right word or what but when i read the first line i keep saying fangs bareing their snarling teeth idk why other then that its realyl good i re read it and it starts making sense idk im slow LOL its good lol
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omg that was a great poem! loved it!
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nicely written and i thought that it was good.
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