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poets soul..now broken

So broken nows the poets soul. Whats killing me once made me whole. A lightening strike with every word. A tortured scream that can't be heard. The bleeding hole left in my chest. A heart that beats at his request. With him now the muscle lies. Put it back before it dies... Still loving him still needing him I'll always bleed within... My one sweet shadow of condolence a glimmer and the den..

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  • understanding-me
    May 7
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    cool

    I think your poem is amazing, all the emotions were expressed well