I push you down
because youre standing
youre in my way
too fucking demanding
stop telling me
where the sun don't shine
i dont give a shit
cuz the sun is all mine
i step over you
but i stomp you on my way
i hear your pain
but I've got nothing left to say
What did you think
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Very strong emotion here, well written.
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Shawna
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Welcome to Allpoetry! :)
Overpowering poem!
It is always best to express ones anger, I feel that is the healthiest way of handling such rage.
Good job!
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Sophie
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