To my favorite hopless heart,
here's hoping tonight these words will flow through the wires,
and find you safely tucked away dreaming of me
as i'm dreaming of you.
I could live by your eyes,
and die by your kiss.
To hope for that would be too much.
SO tonight
I'll do whatever it takes to catch on the sleep I've lost since the last time our lips met. There's a side of me I'm dying to show you.
Maybe you'll see.
Till then I'll keep this fire burning.
Maybe someday you'll be mine again.
Here's hoping...
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the "t" on "to"..the very first word should be capital... and instead of a peoird a comma after heart on the first line would make it read better.
"I could live by your eyes and die by your kiss"
these lines are amazing. beautifully written.
If you took out "but" line 7 and started that sentence out with "To" would make it more powerful.
lol sorry not trying to be critical..just some things I picked up on.
Your writing is amazing.
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