feed me your intensity
the steel of your caress
my lips around the barrel
point blank, i'll be your mess.
adrenaline fiend,
thrill fanatic,
love is better
automatic
so metallic
so romantic
make me desperate,
make me frantic,
keep your finger on my trigger
i am yours to disfigure
take aim baby
lock and load
girl you make my head explode
Author notes
well i've never exactly deep throated a gun, but i sure do like the idea.
A contest entry
- Feeling Anemic........In need of Iron by jcat.
1050 points, ended May 10, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
"It's like I've got a gun in my mouth and I like the taste of the metal." Robert Downey Jr
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I am not sure what to say...LOL. I thought this had a totally different meaning til I read your AN. However I do have to say that your flow and rhyme were great!! Very well done and thank you for your entry!!!
(You may wanna label this adult)
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hahaha thank you, i thought the topic had a rather sensual twist to it and figured it could be something to explore. have fun reading all your entries, i bet you got alot of really fun stuff. XD
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oh my god! i thought you were gone forever!
now, about the poem. it is absolutely fucking ohmazing.
i love it.
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