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The words won't come

I try to be perfect with this pen, let my emotions go so I won't cry again.

A contest entry

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  • Deceits Tears silver member
    May 9

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    Ahh the power of the pen
    Good one liner,
    Good luck In the contest


  • MoonStarRaven
    May 9

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    Short simple and to the point... but its words have so much meaning and impact. Great job for a one liner!


  • hollowriver
    May 7
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    sad


  • Antebellum
    May 7
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    this is great. Really amazing. I love one liners.. they express so much in so few words.