Running through dizziness
swirls of colors above your head
you see flying pictures
pictures of the past and future
You reach a door
with no knob
yet it somehow opens
to something new
Numbers, times, dates
of certain moments
cicle in you mind
making you remember
The date is above you
time below
you pass
wanting to get out
You enter a room of
whats this and that?
how does this work?
and why nots
Laking pleasure time
you proceed to the next room
floating around is rocking chairs
"Creak" "Creak"
whats this?
WHY,its your mind
silly
A contest entry
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cool.
i liked the ending, this is a semi-deep poem, and a semi-funny poem. so ur on my good side. best of luck in this contest.
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I Like this the last line isn't my preference, i don't liek the feelign of it an illusion, but I liek it mostly!!!
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BUT ITS NOT AN ILLUSION
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ok, yah this isnt one of my favs
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funny, haha
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