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Remember, Love

Remember, Love…
When the first splash of yellow rain
First shook the quiet strawberry twilight?
When we danced with the intensity of suns
Our dance- for once meant only for each other
Until we collapsed at last into groggy peace?
When my eyes all brown and blue and tea green
Seized your wild soul?
And then, oh Love, you are I were parting the saltiest seas.
No, we were building a sandcastle.

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Memory- Sugarcult
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  • MysteriousWhisper
    May 6

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    awesome imagery! I really liked the strawberry twilight part! great job and good luck in the contest!!