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Full moon tonight.

There's a full moon tonight,
The stars are shining bright.
And all you can see,
Is you and me,
Dancing in perfect harmony.

There's a full moon tonight,
And life seems so bright,
Just me and you,
Dancing to the groove.

There's a full moon tonight,
Your eyes meet mine,
The music drones on and on,
And we dance as if the song,
had never changed.

There's a full moon tonight,
These stars are shining bright,
There are no clouds in the sky,
Cause everything is so alive.

Author notes

Just wrote this because our dance is on friday and I promised a guy a dance. Can't wait to see how it turns out!
~Kari

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  • Mat Larkin
    June 23

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    well done...

    I love poems about the moon and stars and music. I particularly enjoyed the rhythm of the first 2 verses. I am off to read more of your stuff...


  • Ez Writer silver member
    June 16

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    Hi Kari !!

    A lovely poem beaming & radiant !
    Thou' he didn't make it that Friday
    because of family issues , i know he'll
    be there at the next dance , with bells on
    just waiting for you ...
    Best wishes & hugs , Friend Easy

  • Great poem and the dance was fun.

  • Joyful anticipation fills this poem and I am sure
    we all....smiled ear to ear
    enjoying the memories of dancing by moonlight!
    Have a great dance and thankyou for sharing
    your poem with us!
    ears/Seattle


    • kira1115
      May 7
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      Thank you. The guy isn't going now (Due to a family issue) But I am glad that he at least told me. Thanks for your review!

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