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lost

Im lost at the cross of love
above the sky
I must say by the way
I miss you...
As I grew the more i missed you
I still do...

A contest entry

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  • sweet innocence
    May 8
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    this was really good.. it was short but really nice.
    good job
    and thanks for entering my contest