she gave up today,
tired of luck never lookin' her way.
she tried so hard to figure it out
and finally decided to live without.
she stumbled,
she fell,
she cried,
and yelled.
she gave up the fight,
tired of never being right.
nobody would know,
and nobody would care.
she couldn't let her emotions show,
when she didn't know which ones were there.
she had to stumble before she walked,
and fall before she ran.
cry before she laughed
and yell before she whispered.
she ran, from everyone who was ever there.
she fled, from anyone who dared to care.
she gave up today.
and luck started lookin' her way
she found a life worth living
she realized she was worth forgiving.
any advice?
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I love this one.
I've read it over and over again. -
This is very well penned, as are all your works. Great job, Holli!
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