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[ did you ever see such a sight? ]

did you ever see such a sight?
the way the sky shines even when there's no light
to reflect off your eyes.
and i was so in love with the moon, and how your eyes
were just like dark planets,
i revolving around a central point.
[your smile]
and my eyes were stuck,
you were my black hole sun.
warming my flesh.
flickering under my skin.
you were a roman candle.
too hot too hold for very long.
and you rocked me, shook me with the force behind your gaze.
the quiet force behind everything that you are.
all that you've revealed yourself to be.
at least.
and to say that i was dumbfounded,
is light.
and the best thing about you,
about your skylit eyes,
is that they were looking at mine.

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